楼主加分啊=。=|||||
to whom it may concern:
I am very glad to help Mr. X who is the student that graduated in our university to write this recommendation letter.(+感觉这里加点东西把+) Life is full of wealth, the biggest wealth may be are the efforts and progress.(直译好奇怪的感觉 所以lz自己修改把) Mr. X is the energetic young man who is good at finding them. During three years learning in our school , the academic record has held the top in our school. Mr. X has strong language talent, the first year in high school he can speak English perfectly, that without a English environment. Me and Mr. X talked a lot in free time. In a teacher's point of view, Mr. X in class (。。。。), and while he and curious explore the world, get a lot of extracurricular knowledge. Mr X he is a person who easy get close to, talk to him people will get relax and happy, the most impressive is he had a awesome pronunciation of English, fluent and natural, completely don't recognize this is a never had children out on China said the English. In his school, come to our school to support teaching two New York university graduates also highly of him, Mr. X also and two foreign teachers development the deep friendship. In short, Mr. X is a useful person, I believe that he will make a better future.
For Mr. X in your university study, I have every confidence, he'll be with their own special in your university organization to take part in all kinds of activities, also can finish all our courses to graduate.
楼主求给分+加分啊 翻译了我一晚上的东西 回到正题
表示我英语也只有ESL-EO的水平啊 见谅~~ 太专业 也不好的啦 所以 就这样帮lz改出来了一篇
建议:
1. 建议lz不要写过多得奖或者过多等等 适当加 (*会弄得人家惭愧的)
2. 本人修改后的文章应该还有很多bug lz自行更改(*很想知道 楼主是用谁的口吻写的 我中文不好 看不懂 =3=)



