1:我是一名内地高考生，由于高考失误，高考后没能进入梦寐以求的香港大学。但是我高中时期成绩一直名列前茅，多次获得优秀干部及三好学生奖。
I am a mainland high school exams candidate. Because a failure in the high school exams, I couldn't get into my dream academy — Hong Kong University. But I have been always top of the class during my high school years. Won the outstanding cadre and merit student award a few times.
2:由于我很向往香港的自由商业竞争环境，所以希望能有机会转入香港大学
Because I am longing for the freedom of Hong Kong's commercial competition environment. Therefore I really hope to have an opportunity of tranrsfering myself to the Hong Kong University
3. In first year of my university life, I volunteered in the "Expo of International Education" and "Macau International Firm Festival". I also actively participated in the school clubs and was the emcee for school's arts festival.
4. Since I am currently only in my year one, I have yet to take the IELTS and Year-End Examination, I will submit these results at later stage.
5. If by any chance that I could enter your university, I would work hard towards my goals and adhere to my study plans.
I think I am qualified to enroll into your university with following reasons. Firstly, I am a diligent student with positive learning attitutes. Secondly, my result is excellent in year one. Thirdly, I constantly volunteered myself in community services and last but not least, my linguistic capacity is excellent despite that for a non-cantonese speaking student being only lived in Macau for half a year, I am able to communicate in cantonese fluently.
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