我刚刚写了篇英语作文,请各路高手帮我修改,指导我下,英语作文如下：

SafetyThe Spring Festival is coming soon,so we should care about Personal safety。(so的用法。春节与注意安全无直接因果关系）Firstly,when we go out ,we should pay attention to traffic safety。Before we cross the raod （是road,而不是raod),we should obey the traffic rules,or else that is against the rules。（or后面的话无实际表达意义。） Secondly,when we stay at home ,we also should（是should also而不是also should） keep safe（keep safe应替换为keep safety in mind）。If we are at home alone,we should not use fire（use fire的用法不正确,英文中的用法为make a fire)。because we can be(can be 替换为will be) hurt by fire(用it代替fire,因为之前已提到fire,这里可用指代)。Fire is dangerous。but Electricity is more dangerous。we should use electricity carefully。It is dangerous to touch the television（television换做electrical appliances会更好） with wet hand。（with wet hand应替换为 with a wet hand 或 with wet hands)If we do every things carefully,we will be happy every day!Promoting Safety Awareness during the FestivalSpring festival is at the corner and it is still important for us to keep personal safety in mind in this moment。Firstly,we should pay attention to traffic safety。Make sure you obey traffic rules。Also,steer clear crazy drivers。Secondly,be aware of potential hazards in your home。Make sure that fire doesn't break out in the first place,which is the best way of practice fire safety。Besides,check all the electrical appliances。Best wishes on this holiday season。