谁能帮我改一下这篇文章的语法和词汇错误啊

58,this was my average mark of English in senior high school。 105, this was my English mark of university entrance examination。 To me, it was a miracle。 Duting my senior highschool years, my English was very poor。 Because of that, I did not like English。 I never memorized any words; I never read any English articles; I never listened to English CDs。 Sometimes, I would sleep during English classes。 I hated English。 I hated it。 However, even though I did not like it; even though my English was poor, I still had a dream。 I dreamed that one day, I could speak fluent English with native speakers; I dreamed that I could understand English news on TV; I dreamed that one day, I could read Jane Austen in English。 But it was a dream。 It would never come true。 One day, my friend said to me:” I want to work hard, I want to get high marks in English, I want to be a miracle。” “Can I be a miracle? “I asked myself, “Maybe I can。” From that day on, l studied English in a positive way。 l listened to English radio; l listened to it on the way home; I listened to it when I slept。 Besides listening, I began to read English articles and newspapers。 From that day on, I never sleeped during English classes。 It was very hard for me, but I did not say, “I don’t want to study any more。” I did not know that doing these things could help me get higher marks in English。 I just knew that it was good for me。 105, to you maybe it does not seem like a very high mark, but to me it was a miracle。 Today, I still can’t speak fluent English; I still can’t understand English news; I still can't read Jane Austen。 However, I believe that my dream will come true in the future。 This is the biggest challenge I have encountered in my studies。