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谁能帮我改一下这篇文章的语法和词汇错误啊58,this was my average mark of English in senior high school.105,this was my English mark of university entrance examination.To me,it was a miracle.In my senior high school,my English was very poor.Because of poor,I did not like.I never recited words; I never read any English article; I even never listened English.Sometimes,I would sleep on the English class.I hated English.I hated it.However,even I did not like it; even my English was poor.I still had a dream.I dreamed that one day,I could speak fluent English with native speaker; I dreamed that I could understand English news on TV; I dreamed that one day,I could read Jane Austen in English.But it was a dream.It never comes true.One day,my friend said to me:” I want to work hard,I want to get high mark of English,I want to be a miracle.” “To be a miracle,can I “I asked myself,“Maybe I can.”From that day,l learned English in a positive way.l listened English radio; l listened it on the way to home; I listened it when I slept.Except listening,I began to read English article and newspaper.From that day,I was never sleeping on the English class.It was very hard time to me,but I did not say,“I don’t want to learn it.” I did not know that these things could help me to get high mark of English.I just knew that these were good for me.105,to you maybe It does not a very high mark,but,to me it was a miracle.Today,I still can’t speak fluent English; I still can’t understand English news; I still can’t read Jane Austen.However,I believe that my dream will come true in the future.This is the biggest challenge I have encountered in my studies.

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2026-04-03 09:34:53

58,this was my average mark of English in senior high school。 105, this was my English mark of university entrance examination。 To me, it was a miracle。 Duting my senior highschool years, my English was very poor。 Because of that, I did not like English。 I never memorized any words; I never read any English articles; I never listened to English CDs。 Sometimes, I would sleep during English classes。 I hated English。 I hated it。 However, even though I did not like it; even though my English was poor, I still had a dream。 I dreamed that one day, I could speak fluent English with native speakers; I dreamed that I could understand English news on TV; I dreamed that one day, I could read Jane Austen in English。 But it was a dream。 It would never come true。 One day, my friend said to me:” I want to work hard, I want to get high marks in English, I want to be a miracle。” “Can I be a miracle? “I asked myself, “Maybe I can。” From that day on, l studied English in a positive way。 l listened to English radio; l listened to it on the way home; I listened to it when I slept。 Besides listening, I began to read English articles and newspapers。 From that day on, I never sleeped during English classes。 It was very hard for me, but I did not say, “I don’t want to study any more。” I did not know that doing these things could help me get higher marks in English。 I just knew that it was good for me。 105, to you maybe it does not seem like a very high mark, but to me it was a miracle。 Today, I still can’t speak fluent English; I still can’t understand English news; I still can't read Jane Austen。 However, I believe that my dream will come true in the future。 This is the biggest challenge I have encountered in my studies。

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    2026-04-03 09:34:53

    58,this was my average mark of English in senior high school。 105, this was my English mark of university entrance examination。 To me, it was a miracle。 Duting my senior highschool years, my English was very poor。 Because of that, I did not like English。 I never memorized any words; I never read any English articles; I never listened to English CDs。 Sometimes, I would sleep during English classes。 I hated English。 I hated it。 However, even though I did not like it; even though my English was poor, I still had a dream。 I dreamed that one day, I could speak fluent English with native speakers; I dreamed that I could understand English news on TV; I dreamed that one day, I could read Jane Austen in English。 But it was a dream。 It would never come true。 One day, my friend said to me:” I want to work hard, I want to get high marks in English, I want to be a miracle。” “Can I be a miracle? “I asked myself, “Maybe I can。” From that day on, l studied English in a positive way。 l listened to English radio; l listened to it on the way home; I listened to it when I slept。 Besides listening, I began to read English articles and newspapers。 From that day on, I never sleeped during English classes。 It was very hard for me, but I did not say, “I don’t want to study any more。” I did not know that doing these things could help me get higher marks in English。 I just knew that it was good for me。 105, to you maybe it does not seem like a very high mark, but to me it was a miracle。 Today, I still can’t speak fluent English; I still can’t understand English news; I still can't read Jane Austen。 However, I believe that my dream will come true in the future。 This is the biggest challenge I have encountered in my studies。

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