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请根据以下的任务说明和写作要求,以We Cannot Do without Gratitude 为题写一篇150字左右的英语短文,在校园英文小报上的Hot To

请根据以下的任务说明和写作要求,以We Cannot Do without Gratitude 为题写一篇150字左右的英语短文,在校园英文小报上的Hot To

题文

请根据以下的任务说明和写作要求,以We Cannot Do without Gratitude 为题写一篇150字左右的英语短文,在校园英文小报上的Hot Topic栏目发表。
[任务说明]
“感激”是每个人都应该懂得的一种待人接物的态度。请认真阅读下面的短文,然后完成以下写作任务。
1.概括故事的内容要点,以此引入话题,该部分的词数大约30;
2.就“感激”这个主题发表你的看法,至少包含以下内容要点:
1)什么是感激(gratitude)?
2)感激的表现方式。
3)表达感激最重要在于真诚(sincere)。
4)故事的启示和你的结论。
[写作要求]
1.你可以使用实例或其他论述方法支持你的论点,也可以参照阅读材料的内容,但不要抄袭阅读材料中的句子。
2.短文的开头已给出,不计入所限字数。短文开头:
The other day I read a story which is about …
[阅读材料]
As I got into a taxi one afternoon, the driver was very angry about something that had happened to him earlier that day. Here’s how he told the story:
“One of my fares (旅客) left a wallet in my cab this morning. Nearly three hundred dollars in it. I spent more than an hour trying to trace the guy. Finally I found him at his hotel. He took the wallet without a word and glared at me as though I’d meant to steal it.”
“He didn’t give you a reward?” I asked.
“Not a cent. But it wasn’t the money I wanted,” he fumbled, then exploded, “If the guy had only said something…”
Why was the driver so upset? All he wanted was something simple, but even more valuable than money: to be thanked for his efforts. In short, what he wanted, what he needed but did not get, was a little bit of gratitude. 题型:未知难度:其他题型

答案

Possible Verison:
We Cannot Do without Gratitude
The other day I read a story which is about a taxi driver who got mad and disappointed, for he received nothing for his efforts to return the lost wallet to its owner, not even a simple word. (28 words)
The story sets me thinking about gratitude. Gratitude is the feeling of being grateful, the art of receiving gracefully, and the act of showing appreciation for every act of kindness, big or small, that others do for us.
Gratitude can take many forms. It can be expressed by a large, dramatic gesture or it can be shown in a small way, like finding a very original and personal way to say thanks for a friend’s gift. Whatever we do to show our gratitude, we should do it in a sincere manner, for it is the feelings in our hearts that matters the most.
The story reminds us how important it is to express our gratitude to the ones who have offered us help. We can never be too grateful. The smiles and the thanks we give help us to build a better world, one that we can all live in and enjoy. (152 words)

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解析

意图:要求考生清楚连贯地传递信息表达意思,有效运用所学语言知识。

考点

据考高分专家说,试题“请根据以下的任务说明和写作要求,以We .....”主要考查你对 [小作文 ]考点的理解。

小作文

小作文的概念:

作文多指便条、请假条等,在写作的时候要注意文章的格式(称呼、正文、签名、日期)。

小作文考题的几个特点:

1、重格式,不轻内容:
应用文的大作文的一个很大区别就是重格式,规律性强。格式和套路不对,一般会给阅卷老师留下很不好的印象。例如:信件一般不需要题目,通知和告示却需要,如2010年的题目Volunteers wanted。不只题目,还有客套话署名等。例如:公务信函中的称呼,一般而言,如果是不认识的人,称呼为敬词+尊称。例如,Dear Sir or Madam或 To whom it may concern;如果是写给关系正式的某团体中的人,称呼为敬词+尊称+名。例如,Dear Mr. xx或 Dear Ms. xx;对于关系较亲密的人可以直呼其名(Dear)Peter等。这都是有规律可循的。
2、轻思想,重交际:
这里所谓的轻思想,主要是指因为100字的应用文,除去那些客套话,其实一般主体部分也就2-3个句子就可以解决。这么短的篇幅,是不可能求思想性有多强。这点和大作文不一样,大作文中,如果你没有一定的思想深度,文章结构会很松散,让人感觉是句子的堆砌。而那种连贯性和衔接手法的应用也不会太准确。而小作文,我们要做到的只是注意用词语体以及语域的适当性,要点覆盖的全面性。
3、字数少,易得分:
应用文的篇幅很短,很容易得分。试想,想在阅读理解中10分,你需要在理解一篇500-600字的文章的基础上答对5道选择题。从这个角度而言,小作文的确是容易拿分的,应该成为考生提分的板块。
4、重套路,难发挥:
应用文的这一个特点,仍然是和它的套路性、格式化有关。因此我们更需要用词的准确性。需要我们对语言的语体特点(genre features)进行区分。以免让词汇的语体影响到准确性。写给机构的信函,应该避免使用太口语化的语言。例如06年是写给一个机构的申请信,而08年是写给友人的私人信件,那么两年的应用文写作中,就要求使用不同的语言。从称呼到正文部分,08年的文章用词都可以更口语化和随意一些。正因为这种套路的稳定性,对于同等基础的考生来讲,这部分很难达到技压群雄的效果,很难拉开和别人的距离。也就是说,对于所有考生来说,得10分不容易,得2分甚至4分也很不容易。

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