一、描述段 作文首段为描述段,描述段的内容大概包括两个方面:1、描述图画内容。2、揭示寓意。 第一句-描述句-描述图画内容 1、一幅图画
A、Thecartoondescribesaverycommonphenomenoninoursocietythat内容-SVO.
B、Ascanbeseenfromthepicture,(thereis)内容-SVO.
2、两幅图画
A、Thesetofdrawingsdescribeaverycommonphenomenoninoursocietythat内容-SVO.
B、Presentingtotallydifferent/sharplycontr astedscenes,thetwopicturessuggestthat内容-SVO.
第二句-引出话题
1、社会热点现象
Inrecentyears,alongwiththetr emendousadvanceofthesociety,主题hasbecomeahotissueofthegeneralpublic,especiallyforthosewhoareconfrontedwiththesituation.
2、社会热点问题
Nothingcanbemoreserious(upsetting,outstanding,meaningful…)thantheissueof…
3、良好品质
第三句-主题句-进一步引出主题
Itismostlikelythatbydrawingthepicture,thedrawerintendsnotonlytotellusthestoryof…butalsotoletusthinkmoreabout主题.Thisissomethingweshouldgivemorethoughtto.
二、主旨段 主旨段是全文表情达意最重要的一段,因此内容应该很详实。主要分两步走。 第一步:围绕主题,进一步阐述图片中关于主题所表现出的两个or三个方面
A、Aftercarefullythinkingandreflection,wecometounderstandtheenlighteningpicturestepbystep.Ibelievethatthisthought-provokingpictureconveystwolayersofmeanings.Foronething方面1-SVO.Foranother方面2-SVO.Thissimplepicturewakesupthewholeofthesociety.
B、Havingscrutinizedthedetailsofthepictures,wecandiscusstheimplicationssubtlyconveyedfromit.Foronething方面1-SVO.Foranother方面2-SVO.Thissimplepicturewakesupthewholeofthesociety.
第二步:围绕主题,进一步阐述图片中出现的现象的两个原因or两个方面
A、Thereareseveraldrivingforcesthistr end/phenomenon.Themainreasonisnootherthanthat原因1-SVO.What’smore,原因2-SVO.原因3-SVOalsoplaysaroleinthiscase.
B、Toaccountfortheabovementionedphenomenon(issue,tendency)variousreasons(causes)havebeenputforward.Intheverybeginning原因1-SVO.Andthen原因2-SVO.Whatismore,lastbut原因2-SVO.
三、总结段 最后一段是总结段,这段的主要内容应该包括三个方面的内容,如下: 1、一般趋势的建议(评论)。 2、良好品质的赞扬(举例)。 3、反面现象的解决方法(措施)。 1.评论
Takingintoaccountthefactorsabove,wecansafelydrawaconclusionthat主旨(不多写、简单句).Ononehand建议1-SVO.Ontheotherhand建议2-SVO.
Ibelievethentherelationshipbetweenpeoplewillbeharmoniousandoursocietywillbeabetterplaceforustolivein.(社会和谐)
Inordertomakeourworldabetterplaceinwhichtolive,wemustlearntoliveinharmonywiththenature.(自然和谐)
2.举例
Whatthethought-provokingpictureillustr atesisacommonphenomenonincontemporarysociety.Examplestoprovetheviewareabundant.Itcanbegivenaconcreteexample举例1-SVO.Anothergoodcaseinpointisthat举例2-SVO.Inmybelief,主旨-SVOisextr emelysignificanttoallofusinoursociety.Weshouldtr anslateitintoproperactionindailylife,andthenwewillbenefitfromit.
3.措施
Then,whatcanwedotodealwiththeproblemhavebecomeaconcerntomanypeople.Frommyviews,thefollowingmeasuresshouldbeattachedimportanceto.Tobeginwith,weshouldappealtothegovernmenttomakerelevantlaws(plans,rules)andcarryoutaseriesofpolicyto跟主旨相关内容toguaranteeaproperorderandjustice.What’smore,weshouldenhancetheawarenessofpeoplethat主题isvitaltous.Thegeneralpublicshouldalsomaderealizationthatanypromptsolutionisofbenefittoall.AlsoIbelievethatwehumanscanovercomethisdifficulty,andwewillhaveabrighterfuture.
(我是实习小编西瓜亢:生活不是等待暴风雨过去,而是要学会在雨中跳舞。)



