摘要：背了一堆英语写作模板，可是照搬模板得不到高分，该怎么办？这个时候，你要学会一些变换的技巧，让你的作文不再是模板的复制粘贴，写作三大高分技巧，分享给你。 ►简洁才是美 ►例一 【原】Itmakesmefeelpainfultothinkthatshehastowork12hoursadayandsevendaysaweek. 【改】Itpainsmetothinkthatshehastowork12hoursadayandsevendaysaweek. ►例二 【原】ItwillbeouraimtoensureproperhealthcareforeachandeveryoneoftheChinesepeople 【改】OuraimistoensureproperhealthcareforallChinese. ►例三 【原】Thisbookwillhelpyoumasterthebasicelementsofgoodwriting. 【改】Thisbookwillhelpyoumasterthebasicsofgoodwriting. ►例四 【原】Thesearchoftheforestthattheyconductedwasentirelycomplete. 【改】Thesearchoftheforestwascomplete. ►例五 【原】Wheneveranyonetelephonedhertoaskherforhelpwiththeirhomeworkshealwaysobligedrightaway. 【改】Sheimmediatelyobligedanyonewhotelephonedforhelpwithhomework. ►句式变化 ►例 【原】LuHaograduatedlastsummer.HejoinedtheFirstAutoWorksinChangchunsoonaftergraduation.Hereceivedanengineeringdegreefromhiscollege.采用从句能将这三个简单句以不同方式连接起来。 【改1】Aftergraduatinglastsummerwithanengineeringdegree,LuHaosoonjoinedtheFirstAutoWorksinChangchun.(介词结构+主语+谓语) 【改2】Anengineeringdegree-holder,LuHaojoinedtheFirstAutoWorksinChangchunlastsummersoonaftergraduation.(同位语+主语+谓语+状语) 【改3】Havinggraduatedwithanengineeringdegree,LuHaojoinedtheFirstAutoWorksinChangchunlastsummer.(状语+主语+谓语） ►换种说法 TIP：不要使用一串串短的、支离破碎的句子。要理清自己的思路，尽量使句子长度有所变化。 ►例一 【原】TheArtofStr ategywaswrittenbySunTzu’s.Itisafifty-six-hundred-wordChineseclassicalwork.Thewriterputforthasetofprinciplesinaverytightlycompressedmanner.Theydealwithhowtodefeatoppositionsandwinbattles. 这种表达的问题在于： (1)简单的“主语+谓语”结构太多； (2)"written"和"writer","TheArtofStr ategy"和"It"，"setofprinciples"和"they"为重复用语； (3)读起来很单调。 【改】Inhisfifty-six-hundredwordclassic,TheArtofStr ategy,SunTzuputforthatightlycompressedsetofprinciplesforachievingtr iumphoveropposition. 介词结构+同位语+主语+谓语的形式比较好，因为将"SunTzu"放到了最重要成分-主语的位置，其他成分按逻辑排序居次要地位。整个句子很流畅。 ►例二 【原】Proverbsareshortsayings.Theyaredrawnfromlongexperience. 【改】Proverbsareshortsayingsdrawnfromlongexperience. ►例三 【原】Peoplechangeandplaceschangeaswell.Jenniferfeltthisstr ongly.Shehadbeenawayforelevenyears. 【改】Onreturningafteraneleven-yearabsence,Jenniferhadastr ongfeelingofhowpeopleandplaceschange. ►例四 【原】Beijingstr eetsarecrowdedwithtaxis,companycarsandprivatevehiclesownedbythenewlyaffluent.Thenumberhasbeenrisingrapidlyinthelastfewyears.Thelateststatisticsshowtherearenow1.2millionvehiclesinBeijingalone. 【改】Taxis,companycarsandprivatevehiclesownedbythenewlyaffluenthavecrammedBeijingstr eetsinrisingnumbersinthelastfewyears1.2millionvehiclesatlastcount. ►例五 【原】MobyDickisabook.Itisalongbook.Itisaboutawhale.AmannamedAhabtr iestokillit.HermanMelvillewroteit. 【改】HermanMelvillewrotealongbookcalledMobyDick.Itisthestoryofastr uggleofamanagainstawhale. 唯有多写多练，方能掌握更多的变化，同一个意思，n个表达方法，适当结合，就能形成一篇好的作文，18考研加油！ 【小编说】觉得文章内容不错的话，记得点一下右下角收藏哦~你的收藏是对我们最大的鼓励！
