PartB
52.Directions:
A)Title:GlobleShortageofFreshWater
B)YourcompositionshouldbebasedontheOutlinegiveninChinesebelow:
1.人们认为淡水是取这不尽的;
2.实际上淡水是短缺的;
3.我们就当怎么办。
Youshouldwriteabout200wordsneatlyonANSWERSHEETⅡ.
正确答案:[考题分析]本题为提纲作文,要紧扣提纲。题目给出的提纲就是文章的框架,只需充实内容就可以了,要注意的是,自己的内容需包括提纲给出的条目,可以做增加,但千万不可弃之一边,自作主张,结果因为扣题不紧而失分。内容可以这样组织:首先简单陈述人们的观点,如:雨水,河水,井水;主题部分当然是分析实际情况,如:人口增加,工业用水增加,污染严重等;最后给出建议,如:节约用水,开发新水源等。注意运用however,nevertheless,onthecontr ary,infact等转折词,以及表列举顺序的表达。
[参考范文]
GlobalShortageofFreshWater
Peopleoftenthinkthatwaterwillneverbeusedup.Thereisplentyofwater,suchasrain,waterfromtheriversandwefts.
Itseemsasffwaterisalwaysavailablearoundusandweneverhavetoworryaboutwatershortage.Infactwaterisratherlimitedontheearth.Withtherapidincreaseofpopulationandfastd evelopmentofindustr ies,waterismoreneededthanbefore.Atthesametime,alargeamountofwaterhasbeenpollutedandwastedeveryday.SomebigcitiesinChinaarefacingtheproblemofwatershortagealready.There,watersupplyiscontr olledandindustr yhasbeenrestr ained.
Whatshouldwedoaboutthewatershortage?Ithink,first,thepeopleshouldbemadeawareoftherealsituationaboutthewater.Everyoneshouldconsciouslysaveonwaterandcertainlawshouldbemadethatnowaterwillbepolluted.Wehavetoprotecttheexistingwaterresourcesanddevelopnewones.InthiswayIbelievethatourcitieswillnotbethirstyforwaterinthefuture.



