那位高手可以帮我修改一下这段英文,这是我自己写的,只要修改语法和病句就行了,改得好我会追加分数的!

思路不错的,语法错误也不多,但是语句的格式用的有点重复,可以适当加入强调句 非谓语动词 非限定性从句 使文章更紧凑。还有 FIRST SECOND这类词尽量不要用在文章中。加油哦!　　When we speak of Dunhuang,I think many people must look forward to going there。This historical city is not only a cultural heritage,but also a witness of history。Therefore it is very meaningful to travel to Dunhuang。　　The tourists will have a deep realize about Dunhuang as soon as they touch the ground。They will have a chance to appreciate the charms of the natural landscape and super workmanship of ancient artists。Meanwhile,we should enhance the tourists’ aware of protecting culture relics。If we have this consciousness,Chinese culture must be further developed in the world。　　Anoyher aim of this trip is that the tourists can experience the local folk custom and culture。China is a big country that owns 56 ethnic groups。So there are abundance folk culture and traditional culture。It’s worth researching Dunhuang for many people。During this trip,the tourists can enjoy local delicacies and spend a great deal of memorable time with the people there。　　Last but not least,the tourists can learn knowledge of culture as well as get relaxed。People who attend the tour will relieve pressure and relax there soul and body。At the same time,the trip will leave them sweet memories that they share with their family and friends。