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On one hand,in order to support the rural education,a lot of policies which are about the graduated college students,were published by education deparment。On the other hand,our country will increase the investment in teaching equipment of the rural areas recently。What's more,education deparment has provided aid to almost half of the poor students ,so more and more students can continue learning knowledge。