怎样写英语作文；以前的自己和现在的我

句式——i used to be……（坏的）now i am much more（比较级） in the past,i am ……but now i make some changes like……,
参考如下文《我习惯的改变》
A volume is wide the lawn which can dash about wildly, had arrived at my life; As soon as flows swiftly is long like the waterfall current of water, had arrived at my life; The scene which makes me to shock, had arrived at my life, I no longer was I, I grow up。 The past events like spring, flows out to mine mind, motions a person to not go, the memory like rainbow, crosses in my heart, has is sour and is sweet。 Life unpleasant matter how can it be that in mornings and evenings, at this time, must learn to look that each scenery, the scenery in the heart, is looking the unpleasant matter regard the scenery, how could it not be the life feature fun。 When I sit on the airplane, looks at following cloud layer place slightly to go, I am filled with emotion, the happy thing is short, but my life is long-time, learns to treat the life correctly, causes me to be more substantial。 The life like cloud layer is ordinary, when you encounter the difficulty, you diligently will then eliminate the cloud layer, the cloud layer will be getting bigger and bigger, press you not to gasp for breath, if you will face up to the cloud layer, you will then gain the victory。 The life like sea breeze is ordinary, when you are unpleasant, the sea breeze blew your heart, you prevented the sea breeze diligently the arrival, was also actually helpless, at this time, you complained the sea breeze, simultaneously you must thank the sea breeze, why didn't sweep the unpleasant matter? Looked that each scenery, means your growth, you no longer are you。 Although the scenery sometimes is not very good, but lies in you to treat the scenery the manner。 When I sit on the train, looks at willow place to go far away, my thoughts constantly welling up, the willow has gone eventually, although in the later journey, I still saw the willow, before may not be that the life strong winds does not have the shade not to have the trace, sometimes you have not held it, it already walked, the years have passed by quietly, I whether have held each scenery in each scenery? Therefore I looked clearly each scenery, causes me to be more joyful。