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帮我看看这段话还有没有错 谢谢啦!~Introduce myselfMy name is ***. My English name is Candy. I have long black hair, and a pair of brown eyes. I like read books, draw pictures and dance. I like sports, every subject and too! Special in English. In my life, most hard time in my primary school graduate holiday. I went to skating rink learn skating. But I learn it too bed. Because I am not good at equipoise. Fall, again and again . Up, again and again. Again, fall, again up. Coach drop on, don’t be afraid. Trauma, don’t be afraid. My skating skills were accumulated in tumbles and tears.Get cross this thing, I know : if I have backbone , no matter what , I can do good. Why I choice software and hardware was very good Xi Cheng English junior school read in this school for three year? Because I know the west city foreign language school is a place to culture a student to develop completely of outstanding,in the meantime,three greatest special featureses of the mental education for all-round development, modern education, foreign language of the information technique educate are concentrated.High standard, have special features and open the overall education for all-round development of type make student's quality raise continuously. I believe that I will be trained very outstanding in your esteem school for the later three years.