My children's day为题（英语作文）

l had a good children's day yesterday。first i went to the amuseument park with my parents。it is so exciting。then we went to a zoo。there are many different animals。but my favorite animals are pandas。because they are cute and clever,finlly went home,we are tired but happy!i will not forget this experience! 再答： 好评！全手打，很累啊 再答： 文中有几个时态错了。你自己改改再问： 啊？再问： 说出来再问： 我不知道再问： 我看是再问： 该大写你不大写 再答： 倒数f第二句are改成were再问： 哇靠再问： 请你重发一次再问： 把你改过的 再答： 倒数第二句are改成were再问： 你不大写再问： 谁知道哪一句 再答： l had a good children's day yesterday。 first i went to the amuseument park with my parents。it was so exciting。then we went to a zoo。there are many different animals。but my favorite animals are pandas。because Ithey are cute and clever,finlly went home,we wr tired but happy!i were will not forget this experience!