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With the develop and the widely used of the internet,shopping online is becoming a part of our life。Everything has dual characters,shopping online has advantages and disadvantages also。Advantages:People can buy anything from the internet as long as he has enough money。And you can receive the thing that you buy online at home,without going outside。Shopping online ,you can have more choice。for a word,internet shopping is convenient and fast。Disadvantages:Shopping online ,you could buy something that you are not satisfied with it。 Beacause you can't touch the real thing,just picture。And internet shop[ing is unreliable ,we should be careful not fall into online banking fraud。译：随着网络的发展和广泛应用,网上购物已经成为我们生活的一部分。事物都有两面性,网购也是有好处也有不好处。好处：有钱你可以在网上买到任何东西。你可以不用出门在家收到你想要的东西。网上购物你可以有更多的选择。总而言之,网购既方便又快捷。不好：网上购物你可能会买到不满意的东西,因为只有图片摸不到实物。并且网上购物不可靠,要小心掉入网络诈骗。我自己写的,可能会有错误的地方,你自己在修改一下。 再问： 确定能得20分吗