请哪位英文学的好的大神帮我改一下这个分词的纠错题好吗?

请哪位英文学的好的大神帮我改一下这个分词的纠错题好吗?1.Seen on the top of a hill,this town looks quite magnificent.3.Can you let me having a look at the poetry publishing last week?4.Having been learnt the news,these foreigners beginning to have a discussion in the listening room.5.Robert and his mom were seeing arresting by those police.6.Please take a picture of those moved fire engines on the street.7.Don’t sing again that tedious song repeat by them.8.Who saw those kids drew pictures on the lawn?9.Reviewed his notes,Thomas was copying down passages from the textbook.10.We started to take apart the computer borrowed from Lisa yesterday.注：1.把每句中的语法错误找出来并纠错.我这个学得太差了弄不清,如果可以给我讲解一下就更好了,