英语高手帮我修改下几句语法

英语高手帮我修改下几句语法1.We live in a planet that beautiful but has holes 我们生活的这个星球,美丽但已经千疮百孔2.This looks beautiful cyclones,humans are terrible disaster.这个看上去美丽的气旋,对人类而言则是恐怖的灾难 3.the terrible Tornado will cause a very serious destructive wherever he went 恐怖的龙卷风,所到之处,破坏性极其严重4.Debris flow also cause unimaginable destructive泥石流,难以想象的破坏力 5.The drought cause earth weather-shack旱灾,大地干裂6.The Volcanic eruptions,earth's most angry expressions火山爆发,地球最愤怒的表情7.In the moives of 2012 ,the begain of disaster is the yellowstone volcano eruption8.once the super volcanic eruptions,the ash will arrive in Europe within 3 or 4-day,and three-quarters of American’s homeland could possibly "recognition"（面目全非）.Volcanic eruptions 90% of people will not survive within 1,000 kilometers,because of inhaled ash in the lungs ,most people would death.in the sky of ash will make the earth's average temperatur drops 10 ℃ every year,it fell in 12 ℃ in the arctic,such cold weather will last six to 10 years.so,once the Yellowstone park super volcano erupted,it will be a real earth and mankind disaster一旦黄石公园内的超级火山爆发,在三四天内大量的火山灰就会抵达欧洲大陆,而美国3/4的国土可能将“面目全非”.火山爆发周围1000公里内90%的人都将无法幸免于难,其中大部分人都会因为吸入的火山灰在肺部固化而死亡.飘荡在天空中的火山灰将会使地球的年平均气温下降10℃,地球北极则会下降12℃,这样的寒冷气候至少会持续6至10年之久 因此,一旦美国黄石公园超级火山真正爆发,将是地球和全人类的灾难9.The scientists identified that sun molecular active close peak,which may cause a global communication paralyzed科学家们认定2012年为太阳分子活跃巅峰、期间可能造成全球通讯瘫痪10.If the planet really exist,The 2012 in late December,the planet will again close to the earth which may give bring cannot estimate influence for our earth 如果这颗行星真存在的话 那么在2012年的12月下旬,它将再次接近地球,可能给地球带来无法估计的影响11.Some say that doomsday destruction,some say that evolution ascension.No matter what,all we need to Prepared to face disaster and loving the person12.wo also should improve our spiritual energy continuelly ,which is the the most important factor of ability to adapt to the future evolution 调理身体,提高自身免疫力不断提高自身的灵性能量（提升频率）是能否适应未来进化的最重要因素我这些是在线翻译出来的 其中语法有很多错误 请高手能尽量帮我修改下好吗 不要求句句都很完美 只要看着不是病句就好如果不能修改太多的话帮我修改几句就好