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解题思路： 修改作文解题过程： when I grow up when I was a little girl I wanted to grow up。 In my mind,parents can do everyting they like ,but children can't 。They can buy things they like ,they can play cards ,if they don't want to take medicine,they can refuse（加it) 。Everyting seems so perfect,I hope I can grow up soon 。However,when I grow up ,everyting (everything)seems so hard 。When I go to school ,I have to study hard 。When I go home I have to help my mother with her housework 。Because I grow up ,I have to help people who are in need 。Now I know growing up means duty 。Everybody has everybody's own duty 。When I grow up I know , I'm not just myself ,I belong to the world。 If If life can be again ,I want to be a boy ,Boys can laugh in a loud voice ,but girls can't。If life can be again ,I don't want to be clever ,I just want to stay with my parents 。But (Because)if you are clever ,Parents will think you are clever enough to stay alone 。If life can be again ,I don't want to grow up ,it doesn't mean I don't want do my duty ,( it doesn't mean I don't want to fulfill my duty)I just want to live as happily as a child 。If life can be again I want to have a brother 。I think it's so cool。When someone shouts at you ,brother can come and help you。If life can be again (加 ,)I want to take so many photos with my parents that I can knwo (know)how beautiful my mother was and how cool my father was。 If life can be again ,I wish my sister to be clever ,so that she can get good grades。(marks)。If the world have 'if' (If possible),I want to change the world。最终答案：略