请各位英语高手帮我的作文评分!

请各位英语高手帮我的作文评分!假设你是李华,你的朋友Peter将来中国旅行.请写信邀请他来你家乡游玩,应包含以下内容：1.交通：飞机或火车.机场有45路公交车,在最后一站下；如坐火车你将去车站接.2.活动内容：到附近的岛上玩,游泳,跑步,爬山,吃海鲜.要求：词数为100左右!Dear Peter:I'm really excited to know that you'll come to china for summer holidays.I hope you'll come to visit my hometown.You can come to my hometown by train or by plane.The airport has bus No.45 and you should get off the bus at the last stop.If you take train to come I will pick you up at the railway station.When you come here you will know how beautiful it is.We can play on the nearly island.And we can also swim,jog and climb the hill.Even we could eat the seafood.Let me know your travel plan when you have one.I'm looking forward ti seeing you again,in my hometown.Cheers,Li Hua满分30分!