when some people prased you,after that you cann't do better

第一句“when some people prased you,after that you cann't do better anymore”明显错误,你不然就把when去掉,不然就把after that去掉第二句“because you lost yourself on the prases,at this time ,what should you do?”是紧接上一句的吧,"at this time"用在这里并不合适,不是说哪里语法错误,而是这种讲法并不地道,说英语的人是不会这么说的,我建议你用"when that comes to you"If I were you,I would just see the identity of the prases,and always remind me that prases would just lead me to failure如果我是你,我会看清骄傲的本质,然后时刻提醒自己,骄傲这种东西只会带我走向失败