请大家帮我看看这篇2012年安徽省中考英语作文有没有错误

请大家帮我看看这篇2012年安徽省中考英语作文有没有错误We all want to make more friends, but how to get on well with others? Some students think we should learn to share. Sharing things which we like is a good way for us to get on well with others. other students think it's important for us to respect others. Another important thing is that communicating with each other. And I have some different suggestions.I think we should be polite when we talk with others.Above all, I believe if we are honest, we will get on well with others and make friends easily.