有什么不妥尽管指出来Passage 1:Dr:You look pale,what's the matter with
有什么不妥尽管指出来Passage 1:Dr:You look pale,what's the matter with you?A:Oh!I have a headache,I'm feeling terrible.I need a favor!Dr:Let me see,all right!You have a cold,it make your head headache.Take these pills,you will get well soon.A:Doctor,I'm so fat,Can you help me?Dr:Of course,You should eat less meat and chocolate,more fruit and vegetables.And do more exercise.A:You're welcome.It's my duty to help others.Passage 2:June,sixteeth Saturday sunnyAt last minutes in last class on evening.I was very exciting,Because there will be a soccor game.On my way home,I saw a little boy was crying,I think he got."Do you need a favor?"I asked him.The boy told me her family address.So I found her home quicky.her family was very happy and said:"You are very kind!come in!Let's have the dinner.""No Thanks,I must go home,good bye!"When I got home,the soccor game was over,But I'm very happy,I think help others is happy.
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楼主不知道是男是女噢,你这两篇文章问题不少噢,建议下次写完自已认真改一下,然后再发到网上请其它人改,这次我帮你改一下吧!可能我要求苛刻了一点,找的错误或者不当之处不少,楼主不要灰心哦,以你现在的水平能写这么多不错了,继续努力。另外有一个问题,就是有些说法不太地道,我也给你标出来了。I need a favor!all right!it make your head headacheA:Doctor,I'm so fat,Can you help me?
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2026-04-07 23:32:41要减肥的白开水
回复楼主不知道是男是女噢,你这两篇文章问题不少噢,建议下次写完自已认真改一下,然后再发到网上请其它人改,这次我帮你改一下吧!可能我要求苛刻了一点,找的错误或者不当之处不少,楼主不要灰心哦,以你现在的水平能写这么多不错了,继续努力。另外有一个问题,就是有些说法不太地道,我也给你标出来了。I need a favor!all right!it make your head headacheA:Doctor,I'm so fat,Can you help me?
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