希望各位英语达人 帮我写篇作文吧 要用过去时 "A day to remember"

我写的是一次旅行,内容编的,不要介意哦。Last vacation,together with my friends,I went to Suzhou。ONour way there,we were in a state og great excitement because it was our first trip to this famous city。We have made a perfect plan to go sightseeing and taste local food。First,we drove directly to the garden ,Zhouzheng Garden。We spent the whole morning and took many photos。At lunchtime ,we went to a restaurant and tried traditional Su dishes。During afternoon,we climbed a little hill named Huqiu。After sunset,we were reluctant to leave。On the way back,none of us felt tired and we shared our feelings on that day。Each of us dreamed about having another trip in the near future。