帮忙看下初一英语文章我自己写的,帮忙看下有没有语病,再小的也要挑出来!在线等!A seaside town----Hai

帮忙看下初一英语文章我自己写的,帮忙看下有没有语病,再小的也要挑出来!在线等!A seaside town----HainanHainan is a beautiful town in south of China. It’s the second largest island in China, it’s an area of 33825 square kilometers. It’s a seaside town, and it’s a famous holiday town, too. It is very hot in summer, and it’s always warm in winter. So, in December,January,February,there are many people in Hainan.They think Hainan is a good town to spend the winter. I like Hainan very much,because it is a very interesting town, I can swim in the sea, and I can eat ice-cream everyday. You can see a lot of fish in the restrant, and I like eating fish a little.This is Hainan, a beautiful and interesting town.是作业来着……今天慌乱之中补的作业……真的写得很好吗……我自己都没觉得呢……