帮忙看一下下面的英语短文通顺吗?或修改一下,

帮忙看一下下面的英语短文通顺吗?或修改一下,Sunday July.7 SunnyHello,I'm Li Hua.I visited the zoo with my parents.We went to the zoo by bike.We saw all kinds of animals.There were many lovely animals.I love pandas,koalas,monkeys,dears...I saw pandas were eating bamboo,koalas were climbing trees,monkeys were eating bananas,dears were sleeping...How lovely!We were eating lunch in a restaurant.Then we took pictures.We went home at three in the afternoon.I had a good time with my parents in the zoo.I love pandas,koalas,monkeys,dears,< and more.