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memorization of information by frequent repetition (rote learning) plays a role in most education system。Do the disadvantage of this method outweigh is advantage。EssayMost of the students have the same experience-when he is learning some knowledge which are complex but useful,he tends to learn them by rote /memorization。Instructors has/have long been debating on/about its merits and demerits。Some people who oppose learning by rote /memorization criticize the method for its drawbacks are obvious。For one thing,learning by frequent repetition lead to unstable memorization。The fact is that if a learner merely memorize /the profile and formation/?of specific knowledge,it fades away easily。Once the learner forget/s the basic formation,he is unlikely to recall it again/delete。Moreover,the method is not applicable。Since the student does not deeply/delete comprehend what he acquires /in depth,he is not able to put them into practice flexibly/in different contexts。Consequently,it is not possible for him to pass the exam perfectly and get a satisfactory score。For the third thing,the most significant impact of the method is /that it may stifle the/delete creativity。It is common sense that create/creating activities demand the capacity to combine different fields of knowledge。Thus,there is little possibility for the learners to make connection/s and come up with creative thoughts who//wrong 想说什么 does not even understand other subjects。On the other hand,the supporters argue that the method is relatively helpful and time-efficient。For instance,some students find it struggling to imagine the/a vacuum environment/delete。So they can not understand some theories。As a result,/the lose stimulation/they lose the interest in/ on physics。The best way for them to pass the primary/想说什么 这个词有歧义 exams is learning the formulas and equations by rote。Nonetheless this would not cover/compensate for its disadvantages。In a/delete conclusion,learning method is a/an imperative/indispensible part of study。Learners are well-advised to learning things by understanding for the/delete long-term benefits。5 分左右,有些进步,但作文的提高不是一日之功,还是建议多读些地道文章,在模仿中提高。