请问有什么语法上的问题,

请问有什么语法上的问题,Amy think to go abroad for further study ,but she wasn‘t born with a silver spoon in his mouth.So,she doesn’t choose to go abroad for further study.Instead,she stays in China and finds a job.Finally,she Live a good life,but she Give up her own ideal.Amy want to go abroad for further study but she wasn‘t born with a silver spoon in his mouth.So，she doesn’t choose to go abroad for further study.Instead,she stays in China and finds a job.Finally，she Live a good life，but she Give up her own ideal.下面这一篇