英语过去式作文大约60字左右,最好有翻译

Last summer holiday,My family had gone to HongKong ,At the morning ,my father drive the car to Shenzhen,After the lunch,we take the car to HongKong,HongKong is a center of fanancial。There are many people in there,We just go shopping ,then ,we had a good dinner。The next day ,we gone to the Ocean Park,it was very intersting and wonderful。The good expression was the informce of the dophin,They could save people,also could show many things。They are very smart!I like HongKong very much !