求大神帮忙看一下这段英语有没有语法错误!

考研英语作文吧 但从语法上来讲 存在小问题 不过感觉还是可以多看几个模板 多运用几种句型As is subtly portrayed in the cartoon,two young people are having a football match。One of the football player is preparing to shoot,but he thinks the goal keeper is so strong that it is impossible to shoot in。Yet the goal keeper is nervous,for he is afraid that he can’t defend the goal successively,feeling that he is too small and lack of ability to defend the goal。It is obvious that both of the football players are not confident enough in themselves。在考研英语里应该还是很忌讳用逗号直接间隔句子的不过考完研半年多了 技巧什么的也扔的差不多了……