大家帮我看看我写的这封给编辑的电子邮件,英文措辞有没有问题呢?

大家帮我看看我写的这封给编辑的电子邮件,英文措辞有没有问题呢?I am sorry that I did not express myself clearly.It is the corrected proof instead of “a new manuscript”.I sent the new figure because there is something wrong in thefigure of the proof.Last time,I sent the corrected proof through the NPG Manuscript Tracking System because it seems that the email with large attachment often fail to be received.Anyway,Prof.Xu have resent the email after me and now we have already received the email from your production team.Really thanks for your help!Best wishes,