请各位帮忙修改一下这个英语小故事,自己写的,要求口语化!
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2026-04-07 21:21:38虚拟的麦片
回复It was time to get up,Ribit was still in bed。Mom came in and ask him to get up,Ribit refuse to go,he don't want to go to the kindergarten。So his mom asked,"Is that because you're afraid of the vaccination today?" Ribit was surprised,"Mom,how did you know?" She smiled and said,"Don't worry,Ribit。It won't hurt at all,it will be just like a mosquito bite。"Ribit agreed to go to the kindergarten with his mother,and at the front of the school,they saw Ribit's friend Piggy refuse to go in。Ribit stepped in with his head held high。Moments later,he came out,walk to Piggy and said,"It didn't hurt at all,it was like bitten by a mosquitoes。I am a man,I am not afraid of this kind of pain。"Piggy heard this and went in for her vaccination too。When she finished,they looked at each other and laughed together happily。没什么大问题,更多的语言习惯的不同,还有a和the的用法。我把所有的said都改了,这样念起来不单调。lz要改回去也可以。
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