求my view on a Balanced Dersonal Development..英语作文.

My View on a Balanced Dersonal DevelopmentI'm an art major。All our courses are focusing on arts。I think that's no good for a balanced development。But all the courses are settled。So,I think if we want to get a balanced personal development,we'd better have some supplementary readings on various topics,like global economy,environment problems and crucial political issues,or even entertaining periodical which tells us what's in season now or some interesting stories to get some humor。I think this situation is not just for art students,those of other majors also have the same problem。And also,it's very important to get in touch with people from all works of life,so that we can learn something of different works。In that way,I could broaden our mind and that's also good for us to decide what our life career would be and how to avoid some obstacles。大意是：要平衡发展,就需要扩大阅读氛围,政治经济环境等方面的问题,甚至娱乐性的杂志期刊来了解当下的流行趋势或是读写有趣的文章增加个人的幽默感。另外,可以跟不同行业的人交往,了解不同行业的事情,来开阔眼界,这会有利我们更好的规划将来的职业发展,避免某些弯路。