请你们看看我自己写的这篇英语作文有没有什么地方错了,如果有,请你帮我改正,我正读初一,

1。My family have four man改成 My family has four members family 在作为整体时是单数,即译为家庭时是单数,译为家庭成员时为复数。 man 这里是人的意思,但是此处应该为复数,men,建议改成member 成员更好。2。have father。mother。sisther and I 改成namely,my father ,mother,sister and I 。要知道一个完整的句子最起码要包含主语跟谓语动词。namely即,也就是 ,这一句与前句合并也可改成My family has four members and includes my father ,mother,sister and me。 I 在这句中就改成宾格了,因为在谓语动词后面。3。he like his work 改成he likes his work 。he是第三人称单数,like 也应该相应转换成第三人称单数形式4。she help patients and doctors改为she helps patients and doctors,she是第三人称单数形式,与he 一样。不过这句可以改成she helps look after ( 照顾)patients and assists（协助）doctors。用she helps patients and doctors也行的5。I am sister is in NO。4Middle School studies改为My sister and I study in NO。4Middle School。 注意英语翻译中不要直译,首先要找到主语和谓语动词,study就是谓语动词。而且一般谈到几个人中有自己时,往往要把自己放在后面说,出于礼貌。I 应该放在后面说。6。we studies very hard改为We study very hard 。we 是第一人称而且不是一个人,study 不用改单数形式。动词用复数形式的情况I We You They 名词的复数形式teahers students flowers 等等,单数情况he she it 以及名词单数 boy girl box 等等。7。I want to like father be a policeman。改为I want to be a policeman like my father。 like father 放在句尾好一些。 慢慢来,一点一点积累这方面知识,建议你备一本错题集,把所有的错误记在本子上,这样以后碰到类似情况就容易解决了。