英语翻译聂海胜,男,湖北枣阳人.1964年9月出生,1983年6月参军,1986年12月入党.1998年1月成为我国首批

on September 1964这么明显的错误也犯?只有说到年月日才用on,其他年或年月或月都用in的啊哎,我的译文是：Nie Haisheng, male, from Zaoyang City, Hubei Province, was born in September 1964。 Nie joined the army in June 1983 and turned into a Communist Party member in December 1986。 He became one of China's first batch astronauts in January 1998。 On October 12th 2005, Nie Haisheng flew to the outer space by taking "Shenzhou" VI spacecraft。 And on October 17th, he with his companions landed back to the earth safely。 Nie has a happy family。