英语翻译在来到公司之前,我已经拥有了一份让人羡慕的职业,但是因为梦想,我来到了这里,现在了您的面前.我认为成为飞行员是每

Although I already had an enviable job prior to this,my dream of becoming a pilot led me here。I believe that to become a pilot is every young man's dream,and so,to meet the challenge I have,for example,reduced my weight by 15 kilograms。Yes,I have my sight set on Florida。I am ready。我把 “减掉了15公斤脂肪” 译为 reduced my weight by 15 kilograms我觉得还是不翻译“脂肪” 比较含蓄点。我现在的目标是佛罗里达 = I have my sight set on Florida 我的翻译显示一个“雄心勃勃”,“不到黄河心不死” 的人。这是我自己的翻译,地道,雅致,语法正确。