一道英语改错题,下面是文章,总共有10处错误,每一处错误只能换一个词 ,添一个词或删一个词

一道英语改错题,下面是文章,总共有10处错误,每一处错误只能换一个词 ,添一个词或删一个词As is known to all that millons of graduates crowded into the job market each year.But because of the financial crisis,the situation of the emplayment has because very serious .Consider this,some people suggest graduates shold have a lower career expectation ,such as working in the western area of China .I in favour of this idea.Firstly ,compared with the big cities ,the competition is not as fierce there,but graduates can easy get a job .Secondly ,the lower position may offer graduate more space.All in all,going to the west maybe bring more benefits.Devote yourself to the west,for it is both good for our personal development and for our country at present.