帮忙看一下这个小故事有没有任何的语法错误,麻烦帮改正一下.
帮忙看一下这个小故事有没有任何的语法错误,麻烦帮改正一下.The Old Cat An old woman had a cat.The cat was very old; she could not run quickly,and she could not bite,because she was so old.One day the old cat saw a mouse; she jumped and caught the mouse.But she could not bite it; so the mouse got out of her mouth and ran away,because the cat could not bite it.Then the old woman became very angry because the cat had not killed the mouse.She began to hit the cat.The cat said,"Do not hit your old servant.I have worked for you for many years,and I would work for you still,but I am too old.Do not be unkind to the old,but remember what good work the old did when they were young."
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没什么语法错误,但是But she could not bite it; so the mouse got out of her mouth and ran away,because the cat could not bite it这段有点重复啰嗦,要么去掉前1/3句,要么去了后1/3句。 再问: 麻烦把你改过的不啰嗦的发过来,谢谢了! 再答: the mouse got out of her mouth and ran away, because the cat could not bite it
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2026-04-04 17:06:19朴素的可乐
回复没什么语法错误,但是But she could not bite it; so the mouse got out of her mouth and ran away,because the cat could not bite it这段有点重复啰嗦,要么去掉前1/3句,要么去了后1/3句。 再问: 麻烦把你改过的不啰嗦的发过来,谢谢了! 再答: the mouse got out of her mouth and ran away, because the cat could not bite it
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