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The taste of BeijingThe taste of Beijing is sweet。Ice-sugar gourd,Soybean-flour and Cake Glutinous rice ball ,all of these are Beijing's characteristic snacks that are sweet。Ice-sugar gourd is made of Hawthor which are covered with sugar that is golden。It is sweet and a bit sour。Soybean-flour is Glutinous Rice Rolls with Bean paste that is one of the oldest breed 。As the Beijing snack。,they are all sweet。not only is the food sweet there but the feeling of living in Beijing is also sweet,because all of the Beijing’ person are kind and helpful。The people of Beijing are willing to help others。They are warm-hearted and they help others 。So all the things in Beijing is nice,I like Beijing and I advise you to vist the beautiful city ,and i dare say you will fall in love with it too。我帮你改正了 也删减了也补充了些