请问这句话对么?It is during the process of the preparation for TOEF

请问这句话对么?It is during the process of the preparation for TOEFL did i realize that i still have lots defects in,for instance,understanding complicated long sentences,and fluent oral expression in English.强调句加倒装.我知道正确的句型应该是：It is during the process of the preparation for TOEFL that i realize that i still have lots defects in,for instance,understanding complicated long sentences,and fluent oral expression in English.只是强调句没有倒装但是我始终觉得第一种表达读着更舒服,靠语感我就用的第一种表达方式.但是我查询了,during不能倒装,（不懂者请勿乱回答..）