求英语作文一篇,内容如下

dear janehow is going about you?Many years ago you came to my hometown found that it is very poor and the environment is very bad,garbage was everywhere。but now I will happy to tell you that my hometown is not derty any more,it have a big change。first,the factory made the air pollut is dispeer,people grow many trees an the mountain,now it is very beautiful。second,penople did not get the strang ill any more,and they lived happely。the more important is people's aware of protect the environment is strengthen,they will more love our hometown than befor。Wherecome you to comeback to visit my hometown,you will amarze the change of it。I wlii waiting for your coming。Yours LliHua这个对付高中作文应该是没问题了,但是希望你以后能自己多练习,老师留作业的目的是提高你的能力 而不是应付交差哦 最后会害了自己要把作文分拿高 你可以把我写的一些词语换掉 例如 people 有很多可以代替的 村民 什么的 这样会提高你的作文质量 字要写工整也很重要 加油。再送你一篇。Dear David,I’m very glad to write to you。It has been long since we met in Huaxi three years ago,and I hope you are doing fine。During the past three years,many great changes have witnessed the development and progress of Huaxi City。With respect to the city construction,many factories which are harmful to the environment have been moved or closed。The roads and streets also have been widened。As for the natural environment of this city,you will be very surprised at the great change。We have built a tourist spot,called Huaxi National City Wetland Park,to attract more tourists to visit here。Hope you can come to Huaxi one day,and we are looking forward to your coming。All the best。Li HuaDear MichaelLong time no seeMy hometown and compared to previously had had very big changeThe government began to strengthen city construction,the old buildings were demolished update; in order to protect the environment,strengthen the illegal body blow,close to many harmful to the environment of the factory。Now,my hometown of flowers,greenery is shady,attracted many domestic and foreign tourists to come visit。Look forward to your arrivalYour friend Li Hua