我写的On Excessive Packaging有没有语法错误,写得好不好,我估计有点烂,文章整体有没有需要改正的

我写的On Excessive Packaging有没有语法错误,写得好不好,我估计有点烂,文章整体有没有需要改正的On Excessive PackagingMany goods package themselves excessively today.These products catch people’s eyes by theirs colorful appearance.Nowadays,more and more competitive between producers.They only focus on theirs package.They made the bottle with tempt colors and special styles to attract customers to buy it.Obviously they made a mistake.They attach less importance to their product’s quality.I believe there are two reasons can explain this .Firstly,producer want sell better than the other company.Secondly,many customers believe that delicate the package is,the better quality will be.So they package theirs products excessively.In my opinion,excessive packaging isn’t right.Excessive packaging will be a big disaster to our environment.Their packages can’t be degraded.We must protect our environment by ban laws to force producers to use environmental materials.Let people realize that beautiful package not equal good quality.