大家帮我挑挑语法错误吧

大家帮我挑挑语法错误吧Good morning,dear teachers and friends!Today,I am very glad to introduce myself to youMy name is Wang Shiyang,I am twelve years old.Now look at me,can you see I have small eyes,short hair and wearing a pair of glasses?I like reading,I can get much knowledge from it.My favourite book is《Three Days To See》.Because from this book,I learned how to view the fate.Therefore,I am a firm girl.And I am a very outgoing girl,too.I also like to make friends with people,you are always welcome to our house.This is me,a lovely girl.Do you think so?That’s all,thank you.