一篇英语作文,非常感谢你.

My Valuable PresentLast Sunday,I had my birthday。I received a special present which was bought by(加上了定于从句) my Dad。Opening the present,I was amamzed(用了非谓,在句中很提分)。（要注意语序,先打开,才知道里面是什么）It was a dictionary。And(注意衔接) it was not only thick but （用了not only。。。but also。。。句式）colourful。On the first page,I saw a sentence:Where there is a will,there is a way。I would（用decide不是非常恰当） look up the new words in it and learned them(注意代词的单复数形式) by（此处应该用介词by,另外不用加物主代词,表示“用心”）heart。I do believe if I try（不用变形） my best to learn English,I will succeed。（不包含因果关系）It's a valuable present to me。