麻烦看一下有没有语法错误?

文法上你写的句子并没有甚麼错,但句子结构则有修饰的须要,为了尊重你的原文,我照原意顺序替你更正如下:It‘s the second time (for me to be here to attend改为 that I took part in) the spoken English contest。Last year,I got(可以考虑改为 won) the first prize。My (family embroider 改为 family's business is embroidering) (去掉 the) picture(s) on (去掉the) clothes(去掉 for a living)。My parents are not only bosses but also the workers;Look,they are working with embroidery machines (要加 now)。Sometimes I help them (要加 to) move the clothes更正後的版本:It‘s the second time that I took part in the spoken English contest。Last year,I won the first prize。My family's business is embroidering pictures on clothes。My parents are not only bosses but also the workers; Look,they are working with embroidery machines now。Sometimes I help them to move the clothes很乐意能够帮到你,希望会对你有助。 再问： 语法有错么（原文） 再答： embroider the picture on the clothes 应该是: embroider pictures on clothes。 Look,they are working with embroidery machines 後面要加一个 now 才合语气的要求。再问： QAQ 老师说这样的（原文） 再答： 那麼你的老师可能有少许错了。因为 embroider the picture on the clothes 是把"一张图案"绣在所有的衣服上，the picture 是指定的一张照片。即是说你父母的生意是绣图案在衣服上，但绣的全部是相同的一张照片(图案)。 所以应该是: embroider pictures on clothes。 绣(不同的)图案在衣服上才对。 另外: 定冠词 the 的用法，顾名思义，是用以指定一样事物用的。同样一个字，加上 the 和不加意思是有分别的，例如: Man is a kind of animals 人类是一种动物。(是人的统称) The man is an animal。 "这个人"是个衣冠禽兽。(是指定其中的一个 人)