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看看我的 语法有没有错误superman returns the movie is very interesting,it is one of my best like movie,the movie is say a superman how to save people in need and how to beat bad man to help people,In order toportect the world ,He is a hero in my heart,I like he very much ,I ofen have a dearm i can become a superman to help more and more people in need,the movie teach me many things make me understand that all men are created equal.so i like this movie ver much.写太急了 没注意这些 谢谢你的回答