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请帮我看看这篇作文有没有什么错误?比如语法、大小写的错误Our ClassOur class is in Class one Great five.There is fifty-four students in the class.Our Chinese teacher is Miss Yang,she is beautiful,sometimes she is strict.Our math teacher is Mr.Xiong,he is very funny and smart,he is fat.Our English teacher is miss He,she is thin,sometimes she is strict,but sometimes she is affable,she is young.Our class is Health standard advanced class.Our class is an outstanding class!