英语2分钟的自我介绍,帮看看有没有语法错误

在下一并帮你梳理整洁保证让您满意!Good morning,everyone,My name is XX。I'm from Kunming City,the capital of Yunnan Province。It's my great honor to have this chance to introduce myself to you。I'm open-minded with quick thoughts and very fond of movies。I enjoy watching movies very much,especially those related to Cult,Zombie and so on。In my spare time,I've broad interests like many other younger people do,and I frequently exchange with them by comments on the forum online,In addition,I've been PC game-fan for years,and Silent Hill comes my favorite one。Of course,I also like music,sport etc。I'm able to operate computer well skillful in searching for information over the Internet。Although my English is poor,I still enjoy learning it。As an old saying goes 'everything is possible',I'm sure I can learn English well once I stick to it。That's all for my brief introduction。Thanks for your listening!文章整体上写得很不错,语序稍作调整就完美了,英文中要注意避免一个词重复使用,还有台词的演讲的套路用法不能忽视,作为演讲稿简单清楚,语意连贯有声有色显得很重要,原文内容基本不变,其中有个时态我已经帮您调整好了,for years 必须用完成时态,表示一段时间。下面：everything comes to him who waits 意思不明确也不得体,建议改成这样简单明朗：As an old saying goes 'everything is possible',我想您应该表达的是这个意思,这样文学性就很强了。Professional Provided by BelleFan Translation International BelleFan 对外翻译公司专业提供