带有排比句手法的段落

While,(转折) there are also some people who work to live。They are forced by their circumstances or by their view to work for living。They regard work as a kind of means to support family and themselves。Therefore,(段落小结句)these people cannot balance their working time and salary; these people can’t explore their capacity and enthusiasm; even these people can’t explain why they work when they get rich(排比句式加强语气)To gain the above qualities(点明第四段主题,即解决问题),one should always bear in mind that the cross-century talents are the pillars of our nation。They should value their health; they should maintain a broad vision to their duties; they should keep a fresh mind to absorb knowledge。(排比句式加强语气)But I believe that these people ignore a deeper and more basic fact that without health where is wealth。(转折,将问题关键引导到本段叙述的重点上) When wealth is spent,you can earn it back,however,when health is gone,it will never come。(进一步解释上句内容) Health is more precious and valuable than wealth。(段落主题句) Firstly,with a good health,you can fully enjoy life with your family。You won’t worry about diseases and extra burden on more efficient and fruitful。Lastly,with a good health,you will easily have a large circle of friends,because people always trust healthy men。All in all,health brings you happiness,opportunities and satisfaction。(排比句式和固定结构的使用加强文章的说服力) Therefore,I strongly recommend that people should value their health and take actions to keep fit。Internet also serves as a new way of communication。(主题句) It is much cheaper than a telephone call,especially a long distance call; it is much quicker than a letter,it is also much easier than a visit。(排比句式突出说明优越性) It is one of the most convenient and most widely used means of communication。(小节句)