下面的英文句子有什么不正确的地方吗?有的话请帮忙修改一下、亲/谢谢、

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下面的英文句子有什么不正确的地方吗?有的话请帮忙修改一下、亲/谢谢、Hello everyone.I'm happy to be here.I'd like to intorduce myself.My name is XX.I was born in XX.XX years old.I am a lively girl and very positive in my work.I like to draw pictures,beacuse it is very interesting.I also love fresh air and sunshine.in addition,I want to be your best friend.Thanks.

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2026-03-30 11:50:28

没有什么不对劲儿的地方,乍看一眼。但是都是简单句,不太地道。hello everyone,I am happy to introduce myself。My name is XX,XX year old。因为说了年份再说几岁太啰嗦了。I am quite active and energetic in doing my work。My hobby is drawing,because its very interesting。I also enjoy fresh air and sunshine very much。I hope I could merge into the team soon。Thank you!

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  • 酷酷的路人
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    2026-03-30 11:50:28

    没有什么不对劲儿的地方,乍看一眼。但是都是简单句,不太地道。hello everyone,I am happy to introduce myself。My name is XX,XX year old。因为说了年份再说几岁太啰嗦了。I am quite active and energetic in doing my work。My hobby is drawing,because its very interesting。I also enjoy fresh air and sunshine very much。I hope I could merge into the team soon。Thank you!

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