英语作文 A present for...

A Present For Mom
Mom’s birthday is coming soon,and I want to give her a bicycle as a present for her birthday。
Mom works in a supermarket,which is about 45 minutes’ walk from our flat。Every day she has to take a 45-minute walk to and from work because there is no bus available near where we live。Besides,she wants to save up for my future education in a senior high school。
During the spring festival this year,I got a few red packets,so I would like to get a bicycle for my mom。I want mom to do more exercise and save time she spends travelling to and from work。I hope she will like it。
A present for my Englis teacher
Jessie is my English teacher。She has been teaching me for nealy four years。I enjoy her lessons very much and I like her as well。She's friendly and interesting。Next Saturday will be her thirtieth birthday。I will definitely give her a present。I will buy her a Michael Jackson's CD。For one thing,she likes listening to English songs。She always brings us nice English songs that she likes。And I remember once she said that Michael Jackson is her favourite singer。
So I hope that this present of mine will give her a surprise and make her really happy。What's more,I'd like her to know that she's my favourite teacher and English is the subject that I like best simply because of her。And I'll continue to work hard on it just to honor her。
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