英语翻译Mr.zamorin:若是您看到这段话了,在电话里答应了我给我改掉这个评价,但全因为不知道如何才能更改的话,您是

Mr。zamorin
if you saw this ,as you promised me on the phone that you would revise th e appraisal ,and if you weren't quite familiar with the process of revising,would you spare some time to ask your chinese friend to alter the assessment//bother yourself asking your chinese friend to alter th e assessment。
i learned that you're satified with our product/commodities ,and clicked the "medium " due to the unfamiliarity of the assessment system of Taobao。
if you hadn't seen this ,(it will be fine ),the welcome is extended all the time。/Welcome to our shop again。
Yours
Truly ,
the shopkeeper///
我觉得用虚拟礼貌些,当然你也可以用现在时 ,括号的是我加的哈,总觉得没有有点不顺。那句相当于随时欢迎。